Monday, June 1, 2009

A little something about my story

My story is called "Abigail May" I am going to read you my introduction and please comment.

"Abigail May"
Have you ever read a story about a girl who was home schooled and lived on an orange tree farm? No? Well, you are today! Hi, my name is Abigail May. I live with my mother and father. Also, my little sister, Olivia. We live on an old orange farm and that's our family business. I love it because we live on a lot of land and I feel like I'm in a whole other world when I'm outside with the wind rushing through my dark blond hair. My Ma home schools me in the fifth grade. I am a person who has a wild imagination and this is my story!

So what do you think?
Please comment!

That's not all of my story. That was the introduction. I am on page, #87 in this book and there is a lot more coming!

Keep on writing!
-Gracie

2 comments:

Gem said...

Oh my gosh Grace! That is so good! Can't wait to hear more of the story!

Gracie said...

Thanks so much Gemma!